My Portfolio. Suggestions Welcome!

[KinderKorner]

Finally trying to get my design business started rolling.

I have recently created an online portfolio. It still needs some more loving care, but I'm pleased so far.

I would appreciate if you take a look, and give me comments or suggestions.

http://larose-design.com/

 

[bubba1358]

Technical writer and editor by trade here, and I can't resist re-writing your opening paragraphs on the first page:

"I am Kelsee Gibbs, Web & Graphic Designer.
I create exceptional small business and animal websites. My focus is on designs that are clean and attractive.

When you work with me, you get a trusted partner. I am committed to making your message more personalized and detailed through careful, thoughtful design.
And, since I work remotely, my costs are much lower than most design companies."

Looks great! I love your designs.

 

[KinderKorner]

Thanks! Loving the rewrite. I'll have to look more critically at my paragraphs. I'm not a writer, that's for sure.